Local Poets Extol the Virtues of Mother Nature and Human Nature
Library's Poetry Contest Winners
Staff photo by Cliff Getz Winners in the Laguna Beach Library's annual poetry contest, from left, Steven Mallonee, Avalon Greenberg, Griffin Knutson, Anna Sonnefeld, Alena Riggs, Tritia Timmins and Bette Anderson. During the month of April, Laguna poets young and old were encouraged to submit entries for "Personal Writes," the Laguna Beach Library's 10th annual poetry context. The winners have now been announced, and the poem of the first place winner in each age group is included here.
Fittingly, the youngest winner's piece is a tribute to the library. The wonder of nature is what captivates the first through fifth grade winners, who between them extol sea, sun, moon and stars. Then with the winning poem of the sixth to eighth grade category, the subjects turn to the human condition, beginning with a young girl's quest to understand the world and to make a difference. The winning high school poem tackles human nature at a more introspective level, and the adult winner explores the bonds of friendship over the years.
There is something here for all to relate to:
AT THE LIBRARY
I am checking out books about cows.
Because I was on a field trip at the farm.
And they had a contest to write about
your favorite farm animal.
Mine is the cow.
You know there is so much to learn about
cows.
You know which library I love to go to?
The Laguna Beach Library of course!
By Steven Mallonée (Pre-K and
Kindergarten)
STARRY NIGHT
When I sleep in my sleeping bag,
I think about something big and
white.
The silky moon and the sea-blueblack
sky.
And the sun….
Falling down by bits like rain.
The stars twinkle at the breeze.
When I sleep in my sleeping bag,
I feel three handprints on my heart:
Dark City Black
End of Sunshine Violet
Pink Rose Fairy Dust.
By Avalon Greenberg Call (1st
grade)
BEAUTY OF THE SUN
A very beautiful sunset
shimmering across the clear
turquoise stream of fish,
Those huge green gigantic trees
while the animals play,
A green sour apple with orchards
around it,
The birds flock, and the foxes
whisper,
An eagle soars over me with its
shadow across the sea,
Rustling leaves blow and crumble
across the pathway of
the deer,
The crows back and eat the
innocent mice,
A little sniff,
A chill runs down my back,
And this was an awesome walk.
But my clock says I should head
back.
By Griffin Knutson (2nd and 3rd
grades)
IN THE NIGHT
A dark, black blanket of a sky,
Hangs high, suspended above us
Stars are spread across it,
Little pinpoints of light
Twinkling and shimmering
In the night
A dark, black blanket of a sky,
Hung between the clouds
A bright disk in the heavens;
Lady Moon smiles down at us,
Glowing and shining
In the night
A dark, black blanket of a sky
Hovering above the earth
Shadows of trees' branches,
Clearly outlined against the moon
and stars
Like ghosts, barely there,
In the night
By Anna Sonnefeld (4th and 5th
grades)
UNTITLED
Once a young girl,
Playing on the swings
An ordinary life, an ordinary day.
Two years go by, she is in 3rd
grade,
Starting to learn more about the
world, day by day
Discovering something new, new
people, new ways.
Two more years go by, 11 years
now
In school she starts learning about
the environment, and people
Learning ways to help, care for,
preserve
She learns the problems in the
world,
Poverty, homeless, death
Sadness, as she discovers new
things.
But not all new things are good.
She chooses to do something,
Something she has never done
before,
Something to help people far away.
One person can make a difference
She pays attention, learns about
new people, new ways.
Thinking, now she can make a
difference
Every day.
One person can make a difference
A few more years go by,
Now she really knows,
How to help the world,
In which she lives now.
She starts raising money to send
away,
Telling more people day by day.
One person can make a difference
Almost the whole state knows
How this one girl tries,
To make a difference in others'
lives.
She's now old enough to travel the
world,
Following her dreams that she
found long ago.
Country to country she helps
people in need,
Not knowing what comes next in
the book of life she reads.
One person can make a difference
Raising enough money,
She goes to Africa,
Giving people water, food,
education.
She has her own organization now,
With more people than she ever
imagined,
Helping her every step of the way.
One person can make a difference
The whole world knows now
All she has given away
To the people she sees every day.
One person can make a difference
After giving water to countries and
people,
she sees the faces of the children
playing around,
New to them, even a new life.
One person can make a difference
The feeling she gets from the
happiness she gives people
Is so strong, so moving,
Making her feel that this is all she
wants to do in life.
She remembers the days when she
was young
Not having much herself,
Now she's helping the ones that
have been troubled their whole
life.
One person can make a difference
She's been to every country
Giving, sharing, teaching,
No turning back
Just moving forward.
One person can make a difference
Now knowing she has fulfilledher
life dream
To help people in need,
She reads about a new problem,
Poverty, homeless, disease.
One person can make a difference
And she's on her way,
A new time, a new day.
By Alena Riggs (6th, 7th and 8th
grades)
UNATTAINABILITY
Innocence, a social construct.
Nothingness and a glittery void.
I hallucinate, intoxicated by some
impossible reverie,
derived from my mind's eye and
the cultivation of my heart.
Western winds glide through my
hair,
while my wayward male
companion stands gallantly at my
side.
The sides of the boat slicing the
glassy sea,
ten thousand nautical moments
passed beneath our feet.
We halt, and we are enchanted by
the clarity of this night.
Ebony water engulfed by the
ominous black sky.
Eternal darkness made complicated
with a myriad of bright dying
lights.
I think distance is a mathematical
construct.
We continue to stare,
and here she smiles, all alone.
Silently bearing a silver
melancholy smile.
Looking up at her I remind myself,
sadness is only a social construct.
By Tritia Timmins (high school)
REUNION
We lounge in canvas chairs on a
flagstone patio
shaded by yellowing maples and
warmed
by a late Michigan sun. Old
acquaintances,
gray like the flagstones and
cemented in time
sharing memories and creature
comforts: martinis,
two olives please, hummus, plump
iced shrimp
white cocktail napkins with
smiling faces.
The conversation turns to politics.
It seems
we have become conservative,
found religion.
No more marching in the streets
protesting injustice
or brave attempts to change the
world.
We read Stephen King or watch
TV: Biography,
Law & Order, Perry Mason reruns.
We want
to preserve the status quo, shore up
the military.
Our fears have become our
priorities.
While we debate abstract issues a
young deer
ventures onto the lawn from
nearby woods and
Ella the resident tabby pads out to
greet him.
They circle and sniff, decide to
share the terrain.
We smile at the odd pair and go on
talking.
A chill pierces the sun's last rays,
signaling
time to go inside for dinner. We
toast
the occasion and promise to
reunite next year
once again proffering food and
small mercies,
mimicking the inarticulate
camaraderie of
the vagrant deer and domestic cat
probing the delicate bonds of
friendship.
By Bette Anderson (adult)